Wednesday, December 21, 2005

Sketch check:

First "real" page - the 'pull-out' on the stable. Double check for perspective. I am thinking I may 'flatten' the angle of the roof somewhat - so that the whole building feels a little squatter and more rustic... Thoughts?


gudrun ongman said...

2 issues, parallel lines above the door appear to be converging above the horizon/ eyelevel line. 2 animals seem in wrong proportions. especially the sheep on the right. He seems to be going up hill and be too big in relation to the door. When you do the bigger drawing maybe you could draw receding squares lightly on the floor to get an idea how quickly things are receding.(also don't let lambs butt on left converge on door vertical.)

Anonymous said...

I would like to see the building more rustic. It looks too modern and well built to be a stable from that era...Suzy